Опубликовано 12.06.2017 по предмету Английский язык от Гость >> <<

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Hello, Irina, will you be in my party?
Hello, after which the party?
In honor of my birthday.
Oh, my God, I forgot, sorry, I’ll be of course! And who is invited else?
Lily, Alina, Anna – you know them, and some cheerful guys!
О, it‘ll be cool! What to bring with me?
Yes, please, take some bottles of Cola and a few snacks.
Ok, what I can, so I bring. When I can come?
The start begins by seven o’clock. Ill be waiting.
ОК.

Ответ оставил Гость

Hello, Irina. Are you will come to my party?
Why would you choose to have a party
In honor of my birthday. 
Oh, my God, I forgot, sorry, I’ll be of course! And who is invited else? 
Lily, Alina and Anna – you know them, and some cheerful girls! 
О, it‘ll be cool! What to bring with me? 
Yes, please take some bottles of Cola and a few snacks. 
Ok, what I can, so I bring. When I can come? 
The start begins by seven o’clock. Ill be waiting. 
ОК.